Like everything in the world, there needs to be a balance because
even if something can be good for a community, too much of it can be
bad. Locavores can be good for the economy but there must be a
balance. In order to have a balance, if something becomes better,
there is always a consequence. The consequence can positively or
negatively affect the community but is it worth it to make a
situation better to sacrifice another?
A lot of people buy food in their local grocery stores without
know how it was grown or processed. On top of that the cost also
affects the buyer's decision of what can be eaten by the consumer.
Organic food are popular but the prices are what prevents people from
buying them. The only reason people buy organic food is because of
the amount of chemicals and preservatives that are not used to
process them. “Fruit and vegetables that travel shorter distances
are therefor likely to be closer to a maximum of nutrition.” (B)
This shows that the traveling distance of a crop affects the
nutrients because the more it travels the more nutrients it loses.
“...Produce that you purchase at your local farmer's market has
often been picked with in 24 hours of your purchase.” (A) The
products are fresh and full of nutrients which will make the
consumers healthy and strong. Also small local farmers can have a
better profit because of locavores.
Although freshness and nutrients and pros, the con is that it
limits a group of people that have financial problems so just buying
a few vegetables can ruin their finances. Also some people might not
even care about what they eat as long as they are able to feed
themselves. If people are having financial problems what would make
you think that they would buy vegetables over junk food that
satisfies them because the junk food is cheaper? These days there are
small businesses are closing down because bigger companies mass
produce cheap produce or items. Big farms owned by meat companies
also affect the local farmers. Cheap vegetable and fruits is what
people purchase because that's all they can afford too.
Your essay does demonstrates little success. To put it in simple terms the essay discussed and paraphrased the information given by the sources. There are some grammars mistakes and lastly it is not a full 5 paragraph essay. You do state your position but you don't have strong evidences to support you position.
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